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Utopia Chapter VI Final Hikari: -bangs head against computer desk for a reason other than sleep deprivation induced writer’s block- God dammit…

Faize: What’s wrong?

Final Hikari: Faaaiiiizzzeeee! I ‘kay-ed to my editor! X.X It drives me up a wall to write every other line because repetition of a single word is a big no-no in writing, but then I said it! -sobs- I never have used that expression, not even when I was six! It’s contagious!

Faize: …

Final Hikari: C’mon, help me out here! You’re not that much older than me! Don’t you have some philosophical advice?

Faize: Well, I’d say trying to focus on t
Utopia Prologue Final Hikari: -deep breath- -shifty eyes- Haha, hello there, my wonderful editor, Dr. Meh!

Dr. Meh: …You’re up to something.

-Faize & Lymle wait, eavesdropping, in another room to enter-

Lymle: She’s in trouble, ‘kay?

Faize: She certainly is…

-back in the computer room-

Final Hikari: -sweat drop- Well, I got Faize’s secret epilogue and the following morning I just kinda had my notebook during school…and…um…I just started writing! I was so obsessed with The Last Hope, Faize, and the secret epilogue I didn’t get on my first guidebook-less play through, that when I finally saw the re
Utopia Chapter IV Final Hikari: Ahhhh! It’s warm! At long last, it’s warm out! The windows are open! I can wear one of my many short sleeved shirts! I only wear collared button up shirts and I have a wider array of colors in short sleeves rather than long. XD But it’s finally warm! My fingers aren’t numb! How do you survive in Lemuris with it being cold so many months of the year?

Lymle: That’s easy, ‘kay? You’re too cold all the time because you don’t dress properly.

Final Hikari: O.O I refuse to wear shorts and I button the collar! I totally dress decently!

Lymle: I said properly, not decently, ’kay? In the
Utopia Chapter V Final Hikari: Yikes. I had an “inattentive author” moment last chapter. XD

Lymle: What’d you do?

Final Hikari: I forgot to type a paragraph, thinking that my neck hurt from looking down at a notebook too long, then had to flip a few pages back when I realized I did. XD It took several minutes to find…

Lymle: …That isn’t very interesting, ‘kay?

Final Hikari: No, but it’s true. And I hope I didn’t overuse Lymle’s “’kay” in this chapter, but I kind of think it’s impossible. -.- She often uses two ‘kays if her statements are too long. -twitches in frustration- But
Utopia Chapter III Final Hikari: -enters room with a large plate of cookies- Ta-da! Warm, fresh baked double chocolate cookies! -puts it down on table with a knowing smirk- None for Arumat though. He’s too sour; no amount of sugar could ever sweeten him up.

Arumat: -.- You think that’s going to bother me?

Final Hikari: -sticks tongue out at him while Faize, Edge, and Lymle gather around table for cookies-

Faize: These are quite good, Final Hikari!

Final Hikari: -spins on heel- Thank you! I am going to culinary school in a few years. And you can call me Hikari.

Lymle: -pointed glare goes unnoticed-

Edge: You could probably give Reimi a goo
Utopia Chapter II Final Hikari: -surprised look- Wow!

Faize: What happened?

Final Hikari: I spelled “Alanaire” correctly first shot when I started typing this chapter out of my notebook! I’m honestly surprised my spelling of TLH stuff is good. XD No gloating intended, either. Years of writing has gotten my once deplorable spelling a lot better but usually when I start writing for a new fandom I simply have to do it on the Word Processor, because the spellings of names of places, people, and things completely elude me.

Lymle: But all you’re remembering is easy words like “Aeos,” ‘kay?

Final Hikari: XD That’s prob
Utopia Chapter VIII Final Hikari: -blinks- O.O Holy shit! Faize!

Faize: -slight wince- Yes?

Final Hikari: -points at him accusatorily with Xbox360 controller- You cursed! You said a curse word! Your politeness totally slipped and you cursed!

Faize: I did nothing of the sort. Such vulgarity is below me.

Final Hikari: Nu-uh! It may have taken two play-throughs to realize, but you most certainly cursed! For shame!

Lymle: -curious look- I believe Final Hikari more, ‘kay?

Faize: -.- What proof do you have?

Final Hikari: -cackle- You never should have asked. Just a save file from mere moments before the scene! Just let me take a second and go back
Utopia Chapter VII Final Hikari: -blinks- -spelling out loud- …That’s really creepy. -pokes Arumat- Hey! Your name is an anagram of trauma. Isn’t there anything that isn’t creepy about you!?

Arumat: -.-

Lymle: I don’t think so, ‘kay?

Final Hikari: I know, but any geek like me that loves mythology and etymology knows “Thanatos” means “death” in Greek. But “trauma” comes from the Greek word meaning “wound.” And why does Tri-Ace get such cool names out of anagrams of normal words? -slumps- I have to brain storm and research for hours before I can find a good name nowadays!

Faize: Resear
Utopia Chapter I Final Hikari: -cackle- Yay, I love writing flashbacks that justify future actions and mental instability! But if I have to wrack my poor, tired mind for one more adjective I’ll scream. Which would be bad for this really annoying earache I have.

-is stared at by all in room strangely-

Final Hikari: -clears throat- Okay! Since the opening disclaimer in the prologue was co-authored by my wonderful editor, Dr. Meh, and thus went completely out of control, it’s time for the more serious, more routine introduction I do for every one of my new stories! This new project of mine is my first Star Ocean fan fiction. I do, however, write f
Utopia Chapter IX Final Hikari: Okay! Time to explain “Toothpick Syndrome!” XD I apologize for not doing this sooner, but this was the first disclaimer opening I had. -shot- It’s a term I made up for characters whose personalities can be summed up by the following definition:

A character who is so incredibly powerful you know that they could just pwn the ass of anything other character who tried to fight them armed with only a toothpick. But they’re too stoic, cool, or just mature to gloat about it because both they and everyone else already knows how kickass they are. Sephiroth from Final Fantasy VII, KOS-MOS from Xenosaga, Toya from Ce
Utopia Chapter X Final Hikari: Bwahahaha. There's actual plot in this chapter! XD I'm sure my usual readers are aware I never give my characters any peace, but I don't know if anyone is guessing the plot yet…

Lymle: …Any real announcements?

Final Hikari: Actually, yes! One real one and one not-so-real one. XD The latter is that I completely forgot I was sitting on this chapter! I thought it was already finished and posted.

Lymle: -.- You're really senile, 'kay?

Final Hikari: I blame NaNoWriMo. Now, for the good news! The Grammar Goddess, Dr. Meh, is still drowning in AP high school classes, so Meikahna is betaing for me! Many thanks go to h
Aroma of Love Chapter IV Final Hikari: -cracks knuckles- Okay! I need to get to work! I have about three hours to write this chapter, start to finish! X.X I better dig some Namie Amuro music up so I can effectively write humor…

Myuria: Mmm, that’s nice. -obviously not interested- By the way, since AoL is about half done, the readers are asking what’s next.

Final Hikari: …Next?

Myuria: Yes. As in, what you’ll be writing after Aroma of Love for the Star Ocean section to go alongside Utopia.

Final Hikari: -anime crash- B-but I already have sixteen projects/commitments! Though I would like to write “How Many Phantoms?” …It
Aroma of Love Chapter I Final Hikari: -seated at the Calnus’ bar beside Myuria, only with a notebook and PC in front of her instead of a drink- Ah, poor Faize. Lymle and I bring out the worst of him.

Myuria: Most couples tend to bring out the worst of each other.

Final Hikari: What about me then?

Myuria: I bar sadist authors from my calculations. -takes a sip-

Final Hikari: -flips notebook page- Uh, thanks?

Myuria: Your welcome. Although I could make you a batch of Love Potion No. 256, if you’re interested.

Final Hikari: XD How much will you charge me? I may not always worship that Haggling skill of yours’.

Myuria: I could make some at
Aroma of Love Chapter II Final Hikari: XD Another chapter! My VII readers must want my blood by now.

Reimi: Just how often are you working on stories for your other fandoms?

Final Hikari: Not nearly as often as I should be; I’ll be stressing to keep true to the promises I made about finishing Remember My Name and Valkyrie’s Favor this year. XD Shame on me.

Myuria: Dare we agree?

Final Hikari: If it was Arumat, I’d put up with it, but since you’re anything but, no. XD …Although neither of you seem to believe in that crazy, totally out-there concept of shirts.

Reimi: Final Hikari doesn’t won anything from Star Ocean: The Last Ho
Aroma of Love Chapter III Final Hikari: -sitting in Calnus’ Recreation Room polishing new pair of glasses- -thoughtful- -glint in eye when Faize walks past- Oh! Faize! Would you come here a minute? -epitome of innocence-

Faize: Hmm? Is there something you need?

Final Hikari: -sweet smile- Can you see what’s different about my new pair of glasses?

Faize: O.O Sorry, I have work to do. -departs rather quickly-

Final Hikari: -frown- But they really are new! And they really are different! Look! New warranty card and case! -waves both-

Arumat: -slightly skeptical look- …Dare I even ask what that’s all about?

Final Hikari: (thinking to self:
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